I haven't completely analyzed this yet, but it looks pretty good to me. +Rep for the effort. I'm surprised this has had less response from newer and lower limit players..... ok, actually I'm not.
I agree with Mayhem that you can add in a few more hands in LP, especially at higher stakes, but for lower limits, it's probably better to be a little bit tighter.
Paying this style, what does your VPIP/PRF come out to? Around 18/14ish? I think that's a great starting point, especially for people learning the game, but I personally prefer playing looser - 22/18 to 24/20 or so.
Edit: Your current post count is my birth year - wooohooo!