That's right Lou,
The proof will be in the pudding.
I had a preliminary glance at your basic stuff and was focusing mainly on your writing style, which is...ok.
It reads very much like a narrative rather than an instructional piece - lots of excess, unnecessary sections that can (and probably should) be streamlined to make the piece of writing more accessible.
New players really like to see hard, focused points - your article was just way too long. You could cover the same amount of instruction in half (or less) words.
I only had a quick glance at it though. When I get a chance, I'll sit down and read the entire document start to finish.
Look forward to seeing your intermediate and advanced stuff - I'm sure you'll be a valuable contributor to any poker forum.
CF
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