Writing poker instruction, need proof-readers

[johnbaker]

Hey I'm teaching poker to a few friends right now, and I have summarized what I think are the most important aspects of poker for beginners in 10 pages. I plan on writing about another 10 pages (per topic) on

-playing styles
-reads
-adjusting to tournament play

and another 5 pages (per topic) on

-odds
-bluffing
-misc. poker advice


Anyone who wants to read the first 10 pages, post here and I'll post it all here or email it to you or something.... I would greatly appreciate anyone who could proofread it and tell me anything I'm missing or any mistakes I made. Thanks

-JB