Writing poker instruction, need proof-readers

[johnbaker]

Hey I'm teaching poker to a few friends right now, and I have summarized what I think are the most important aspects of poker for beginners in 10 pages. I plan on writing about another 10 pages (per topic) on

-playing styles
-reads
-adjusting to tournament play

and another 5 pages (per topic) on

-odds
-bluffing
-misc. poker advice


Anyone who wants to read the first 10 pages, post here and I'll post it all here or email it to you or something.... I would greatly appreciate anyone who could proofread it and tell me anything I'm missing or any mistakes I made. Thanks

-JB

[Talking Poker]

Post it!

I'm going to be adding "Articles" to the main part of this site very soon. If your writing is good, and if you are interested, maybe I'll publish everything for you when you are done.

[2Tone]

The only way to get better. I'd love to see your material.

[Aequitas58]

Show us what you have.

[Charlie Frank]

I'll proof-read them for you.

Email to

CF

[johnbaker]

i wrote this mainly to help a friend of mine who is one of the biggest fish i know, so I had to start from the ground up.... i kind of skipped around a couple of topics that he was familiar with, so please tell me what i left out that beginners should know

this is kind of huge, i hope the forum will let me post something this long.... crit&comments would be appreciated, thanks


(edit)

it was too big to fit it all, you can read it here



-JB

[Aequitas58]

Very basic stuff.

Have anything on the intermediate / advanced level yet? Interested to see some of your "intermediate" plays.

[johnbaker]

ive written 2 page of intermediate stuff, which is a lot more interesting to read than the beginner section.... like i said, the beginner stuff is really, really basic and probably no one who reads this site will learn anything from it.

intermediate section i will probably finish and post by friday night

i'll probably do the advanced section in the next couple of weeks

-JB