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10-21-04, 10:17 PM
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Though we've had some clashes in other topics, i appreciate you reading my stuff and commenting CF. I know the stuff I wrote was kind of loose, thats why I posted it here; for people to tell me whats wrong with it. Any specific sections that you think I could improve? Any tips on how?
I'll let you guys know when i finish the next part, which is about intermediate play. thanks -jB |
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